Woah, who would have guessed eh? It's another writing task woooo-

Hey, so, this week around for writing we had to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings  and lengths to give effect, for the create task we had to take sentences from our Narrative and revamp them to make them more engaging, I had to identify if it was a compound, complex, or simple sentence, then find out what the sentence started with.
I already had an advantage with this because I had already finished my narrative and had alot to choose from. 

 Here is my task for the week below.

Also, here is my narrative I have written, it is about an unnamed boy ending up in a mysterious box, unaware of where he is, near paranormal things begin to happen.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P_1iqa1AbPYbbU1ys80EHQFozhPpR68GS__RYFXJ_Uc/edit?usp=sharing

Out of the sentences there, which change did you like?