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Tuesday, September 3, 2019

The Outbreak

For writing we had to write a narrative and yesterday I finished mine, I'm pretty sure it is the longest in the hub at a grand total of... 3000 words and 10 pages. The story is about a deadly disease that wipes out the Americas and travels across they ocean to conquer the southern part of Africa, but a scientist team in Russia find a cure to it! they put the cure into nukes and launch them into vital areas of the disease, but 1 it gets caught in a hurricane! throwing the nuke into the water.

They then launch 8 atom bombs to do the job and they did! the earth is saved and everyone is happy (Although the American population is 79 because of people on holiday) but everyone else is!

How long was your biggest story?

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2019 at 8:49 AM

    Hi Nicolaas,

    Wow what a long story!! I have actually seen a year 8 who has written over 3000 words for their story but I think you would probably have the longest story out of all the year 7s. I liked how you added a quick summary of your story. Next time it would be great if you added a link to your story on your blog post so that we could read it. I do not know if I have ever written a story that big before but I have written assignments for university which have been over 10,000 words. What is your favourite thing to write about?
    - Miss Powick

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2019 at 1:55 PM

      I don't know what my favourite thing to write is, I just like writing.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2019 at 9:32 AM

    Kia Ora Nico Your story sounds great! it must have taken a while to write. could you please insert the story so that we could have a read.

    -Tane

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